My fingers touched her smooth cheek, brushing one golden hair out of her face. We locked eyes and felt each others company. We pressed our lips together, our faces hot with passion. Then... she was gone. The wind seemingly blowing her away from me. The Sun... the Moon had taken her and left me. All alone. Nobody to kiss me. Nobody to love me.
Nobody to call mine.
Sooo...I'm guessing this either was a dream or just a random thing you wrote..?
ReplyDeleteOr did you go through a breakup, because if you did, I'm sorry! :'(
Oh, and you put "our faces hot with compassion", but don't you mean passion? Just a heads up.
DeleteJust something random. And thanks for the heads up! I got a little confused!
DeleteI loved how you added, what color her hair was.
ReplyDeleteThanks! I like being descriptive!
DeleteI love that so much, it's so hopeless and so romantic. It would be interesting to see something else like this.
ReplyDeleteYeah! I'll definitely do more!
DeleteMind blown!! That was amazing. Great detail to.
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteThis is a beautiful, yet sad post. It was impressive how much emotion you packed into such a short paragraph.
ReplyDeleteAll I had to do was picture myself as another person. That would never happen to me!
DeleteThis. Is. Amazing. It shows both the positives and negatives of having a love.
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